"IT'S THE STORYLINE OF AN ON THE EDGE THRILLER THAT GETS THEIR ATTENTION." 

 

The KJL Manuscript Critique Service offers comprehensive, personalized feedback designed to elevate your work while honoring your unique voice and vision."

 

What you'll receive:​

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• Big-picture feedback, suggestions, and observations in the editorial report 

• Feeback on your strengths and actionable recommendations to strengthen your manuscript's weaknesses

• Comments on organization, structure, grammar, and punctuation 

• Feeback on flow and readability

• Professional suggestions on ways to improve your manuscript 

• (1) round of revisions 

   

KJL Bonus Service (no extra charge, minimum 50 pages) includes comments on supplementary materials:

• Book title and subtitle (if provided) 

• Dedication page (if any)

• Author's note (if provided)

• Acknowledgments page (if any)

   

Turnaround time: 1 to 8 weeks 

 

Perfect for fiction, non-fiction, narrative, poetry, prose, memoir, romance, short story, novel, thriller, self-help, children's literature, educational content, and essays 

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Ready? Email Write@kalajordanlindsey.com for a price quote. 

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I look forward to helping you polish your dream book.

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Kala Jordan-Lindsey